Rearranging the installation

Rather than totally giving up on the installation, I went back at it with some editing and new ground paper. I'll need to pick up another roll of black to get more depth and space between items.  I do think there is improvement.  The swan is now more firmly engaged.  I am making a new rubber duck in the studio. Here are some variations. To be continued...

without swan

with swan

Adding smokes, shifting orb. Need more space, looking cluttered.